所有句子均来自官方发布的中英双语【新时代党的治疆方略白皮书】
中英对照 + 句式分析 + 翻译技巧
答应我!一定要细看细品长难句的拆解啊~
很多翻译都让人拍案叫绝 不愧是官方!!!
中英双语全文对照画线版还在框框逐字逐句细读中。。。
举几个栗子?
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?原文:新疆坚持以文塑旅、以旅彰文,推动文化和旅游深度融合发展,让游客领略自然之美、感悟文化之美、陶冶心灵之美,文旅产业加快发展。
译文:Xinjiang encourages the positive interplay between culture and tourism and advances their deeper integration, enabling tourists to embrace the beauty of nature, appreciate the beauty of culture, and nurture their spiritual world. The cultural and tourist industries in the region have witnessed accelerated development.
句式分析:
连动式长句,含目的状语 + 并列动宾,核心为 “文旅融合”。
翻译技巧:
“以文塑旅、以旅彰文” 译为 the positive interplay between culture and tourism(意译,精准表达互动关系);“领略 / 感悟 / 陶冶” 译为 embrace/appreciate/nurture(动词搭配精准,避免重复);“心灵之美” 译为 spiritual world(意译,更符合英文)。
? 原文:新疆全面推广普及国家通用语言文字,学校国家通用语言文字教育教学持续加强,全社会使用国家通用语言文字意识和能力明显提升,以语言相通促进心灵相通、命运相通。
译文:Xinjiang has promoted the popularization of standard spoken and written Chinese across the region, with its teaching and education in schools continuously strengthened. The public's awareness and ability to use standard Chinese have been significantly enhanced, uniting hearts and minds for a shared future through a common tongue.
句式分析:
连动式长句,后句含结果状语,有比喻表达。
翻译技巧:
用 with 的复合结构衔接学校教育情况;“推广普及” 译为 promoted the popularization of(固定搭配);“意识和能力明显提升” 译为 awareness and ability...have been significantly enhanced(被动语态,符合英文);
“以语言相通促进心灵相通、命运相通” 译为 uniting hearts and minds for a shared future through a common tongue(意译,更简洁优美)。
? 原文:截至 2020 年底,新疆 306.49 万农村贫困人口全部脱贫、3666 个贫困村全部退出、35 个贫困县全部摘帽,困扰新疆数千年的绝对贫困问题得到历史性解决,新疆同全国一道全面建成小康社会。
译文:By the end of 2020, over 3.06 million of Xinjiang's impoverished rural population, its 3,666 impoverished villages, and 35 impoverished counties had all emerged from poverty. Once the specter of absolute poverty that had haunted Xinjiang for millennia was finally eradicated, the region was able to complete the building of a moderately prosperous society in all respects, along with the rest of the country.
句式分析:
超长并列句,含数据、结果、历史意义,脱贫相关表达多。
翻译技巧:
拆分两句,前句讲脱贫数据,后句讲历史意义;“贫困人口全部脱贫 / 贫困村退出 / 贫困县摘帽” 译为 impoverished rural population / impoverished villages / impoverished counties had all emerged from poverty ,避免重复;
“困扰” 翻译为 “haunted”,该词有萦绕、困扰的含义,生动形象地传达出贫困如幽灵般长久盘踞的状态;“绝对贫困”“absolute poverty” 准确对应;“数千年”“millennia” 表达恰当;
“历史性解决” 意译为 “finally eradicated”,“eradicated” 表示根除,体现解决的彻底性,“finally” 强调最终得以实现,突出解决的这一历史意义;“全面建成小康社会” 译为 completed the building of a moderately prosperous society in all respects(官方定译)。
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